Friday, February 10, 2012

Form 5 Sample of Essay.. Enjoy guys and do my homework ..Puhleaz ya! =D

Descriptive Essay Homework- Describe the famous person in your school.


When we were in high school, my friend Sookie and I made a map of the school lunch tables according to popularity. This was easy to do, because students only ate lunch with others of about the same popularity. We graded them from A to E level. There was a table that full with football players and cheerleaders, science nerd, math geek and so on. Every part of the table has their own prep talk and endless topic to talk about. This is where the grading of social status takes place. I was never been acknowledge or notice by anyone accept for my teachers. Suddenly, a tall boy with “langsat’ skin came and approached me to talk about debate. Who is he? What is his purpose talking to someone like me?


An investigation was been made by myself to ensure whether his intention was in a proper behaviour. I would like to name him as Mr Darcy the character that I’ve been admired since I am a fan of Jane Austen novels. First, Mr Darcy was a president of the debate and public speaking club He is very good in delivering a speech and class presentation. He got the will and the requirement to become an astounding orator one day. He can even sell a piece of paper and make everyone to buy it for RM10. His words were affectionate and had influenced all students in school to set him as an asset of inspiration to be a great leader. For instance, he could help any club to build up their promotion in developing more interesting ideas in order to welcome new members.


Second, My Darcy was not just genuinely in public speaking and debate,he was also an amateur chef. He won The Young Chef Competition at Istana hotel during the hot season of Masterchef Malaysia season 4. Here shows that , he is a good cook and can managed well in handling kitchen works. His performance in food presentation was a splendid recital. In addition,he is very particular in practical work and cleanliness and that makes him been admired by all the girls who is in favour in food , deserts and beverages. Nevertheless, he even persuades other students in school to buy his own home-made fresh brownies. I’ve tasted his brownies and it is absolutely melted to my alveolar-ridge.


Third, apart from his marvelous performance in living skills, he is also well known by manners and courtesies in communicating with the teachers and his friends. Moreover, Mr Darcy wont ever argued if he doesn’t have the right claim from both parties to make a clear judgment about a situation. It really shows that he is well –read and understand the concept of equality in receiving several statements to make simple analysis. This was been evaluated by his teachers during “Minggu Sopan Santun’ in school. Hence, he won the Abu Bakar As-Sidiq Award during that particular event through his best behaviour .


In my own view, a famous person in school doesn’t have to be a person who posses a dangerously handsome looks, hitch a luxurious car to school , hangout with the coolest people and grab the “prom king’ title every year. He should have a special criteria that makes an' A list' to be a best friend to all of the students so that he or she could help each individual to be the best they could be.As time goes by, Mr Darcy is the person who is sitting next to me everyday and serve him a cup of tea before heading to his workplace and yes he is that special person in my life. =)

3 comments:

nicekittyy said...
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nicekittyy said...

Best best :)

Aimi Farhana said...

love that :)